One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf ball, the story was a fantasy but hey he was righ... about it being unrealistic, and he had brought it up politely so no reason not to make a change. After making those corrections I reposted the story awaiting further comments and hoping for a few compliments.There were some attaboys and requests to keep writing, but another reader pointed out that my story would go better if it was a girl. Ek din main aur mera dost park me ghum rahe the toh mujhe anu ek ladke ke saath wahan dikhi,mujhe unke haav bhaav se laga ki dono me kuchh chal raha hai.Main wahan se aa gaya.Agli baar jab anu se milne gaya toh akele me uske dost ko puchha,toh woh batayi ki woh anu ka bf hai,4-5months ho gaye hai unke relationship ko. Main ek din notes laane mere dost ke ghar gaya tha,toh achanak se maine ush ladke ko dekha paas ke tea stall pe.Maine apne dost ko puchha “Ye ladka kaun hai,jaanta hai?”,dost ne. More

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