" And what did you do to deserve this punishment again?" Kurt asked though he knew the answer."I lay in sin, against the Bible and God's eyes, with an...ther female. I did things to that female that I should not have done and I let her do similar things to me. I bared the mark of the devil in our coupling. Many times. Please forgive me Brother Kurt." I do forgive you child." Then punish me as I deserve, so I may be cleansed in God's eyes." Very well child, meet me in Room four. I will be there. Most were complimentary but several with some sincere criticism. I went back and did a thorough spell and punctuation check, and fixed some run on sentences, also paragraphs were too long. One person pointed out that I was being unrealistic on how long I was having my character hit a golf ball, the story was a fantasy but hey he was right about it being unrealistic, and he had brought it up politely so no reason not to make a change. After making those corrections I reposted the story awaiting. More

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